Claire s secret ambition

On Monday Claire went to the military to join the army but she did not get the job to be a soldier,  she did get the doctor job though, that means she can fix the soldiers wounds. She was happy and her mum  was happy for her. She is a good doctor  but she wanted  to look after the dogs. Claire told  her boss and he said he might give her the job. After a couple of days she got to look after the dogs. Claire got the job that she really wanted.

reading week 3

Time Out   by C. Todd Maguire School Journal P4 N2 2004

Is Caitlyn her real name?
no	she says that her name is  caitlyn so no one can find the refuge.

They can’t tell people where the refuge is because it is a dangerous place to go to.
YES	so bad people might come like the stepfather

There are good things about living at the refuge.
YES	because there will be no people getting hurt and there will be no police coming to the

VOCABULARY - describe in your own words what these words mean:

1. refuge : A safe house to live in
2. crowded : crazy and dumbdumb in ways
3. concentrate :
4. agreement : being angry at two or more  people

Plus	Minus	Interesting
You can leave your kids there after school and weekends	You have to share the shower and share your room  with everyone	The refuge is a safe house for people that is hurt and pore

reading week 2

The layout of the words make this poem more interesting.
it does	yes it makes it more interesting

1. pulsing=throb rhythmically pulsate
2. gazing= it is another word for watching
3. infinite=is a number that doesn't stop
4. depth=is a night sky
5. polished= steering= it is something that is spinning  

        

1. We look up at the sky, but the poem says: ‘gazing down into the infinite depths of the night sky’ what do you think it means by that?  

2. Where is the author when they wrote this poem?

3. The last stanza says: ‘Life is a space journey - anyone steering?’ What is this a metaphor for?

4. This poem uses rhyme at the end of each stanza, what other language f

5. Using the same language features (rhyme, layout, metaphors, and the others you've identified) write your own poem about time, from looking out a window…

BY MCKENZIE CHARILE

reading week one

A comma is like a full stop
yes	It is just like a full stop but it is not on the line and it does not make the words stop.

This poem has correct punctuation.
yes

VOCABULARY - describe in your own words what these words mean:

droop - Means that you are tired and sad.

squiggly -It means things that you what to wriggled

chaos -Means that it is not controllable.

palm- On your hand.

sense- means that you understand

I'm a pet pen click click on a book writing the waves I'm playing some video games pop i got you with a camera  bANG  and when I write i blow people away.

my height

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