I am a Year 5 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mrs. Parker
Wednesday, 16 September 2015
eating insects
We should eat insects as part of a healthy diet
I disagree because if you eat insects they might move around and you could get sick, they are gross and might get stuck in your teeth.
When you are chewing on the bug it could move on your tongue and it can bite it.
You could get sick by the bugs it could lay eggs in your body and make you throw up
some bugs have liquid in there body that makes their body watery they are drinkable and some are crunchy that makes a yuck sound.
that is why i disagree on eating insects .
Tuesday, 15 September 2015
cross country practice
Today we practised for cross country. We did two warm ups before we ran two laps around the field, We did stretches, first we stretched our legs so we can run far, Then we stretched our arms because you can run far if your arms are moving and are not by your side. If they are by your side you wont run as far but it does not matter if you come first or last. We ran around the field and the girls went first, the boys went after then Mrs Parker swapped with Mrs Raj. Room ten ran also but they started before us. We all where tired when we finished and went back to class. I felt tired but I still had fun.
Friday, 4 September 2015
Glenbrae School is the best school
Glenbrae School is the best school in the world! because we learn lots, we have workshops and we go on lots of trips.
We have awesome children that learn about being cyber smart. We learn sports and we are interested in maths reading, writing, inquiry and also art.
We have a lot of workshops and they are for shows, learning poems, and there is a sick bay to look after us.
We go on cool trips. We learn interesting things about dinosaurs and lizards. We usually have fun riding on trains, singing on the bus and running to the next place we go to.
Glenbrae is the best school in the world because we have awesome children we are interested in lots of learning, We have a lots of workshops and we go on amazing trips to learn more things and that is why glenbrae school is the best school in the world.
Friday, 28 August 2015
KEN THE Detective
One lonely night everyone in Glen Inns was asleep. Ken was walking home. While he was walking home across the street there was a fire, Ken went to hide behind the wall, and he saw a guy with a black mask running out with a knife. The man ran to his blue car and sped off. Ken went to see the fire, he heard screaming and realised there were two kids trapped inside. The kids were screaming for help but luckily he got the two kids out. He went to get some more people but wood fell on the entrance blocking his path. One of the kids had a broken leg, Ken called the emergency service.
Ken said he wanted the doctors to come and get them. When they arrived they offered a ride home when he got home he went to his room and had a sleep. The next day Ken Went to the police but they did not believe Ken so Ken went around the town looking for clues he went to count down for clues and he found a knife on the floor it had some blood on it then Ken he walked passed the chicken and chips shop and he heard some talking behind the shop he hides behind the wall he saw some boxes and he secured the boxes and then the same car appeared then the car started up then it chased him through the town finally he lost him then at night he went to the car shop to get a car because he got tired of running then at night he was driving around when suddenly he heard a gunshot he went to the bank he saw the same man who was at the fire he sneaked in then he grabbed the man in the mask he put him to sleep then he brought him to the police station then they gave him the job to be a police officer he was so happy, he said “I'm going to buy everyone dinner.Then he went home and Ken said to himself” tomorrow is another day.
Ken said he wanted the doctors to come and get them. When they arrived they offered a ride home when he got home he went to his room and had a sleep. The next day Ken Went to the police but they did not believe Ken so Ken went around the town looking for clues he went to count down for clues and he found a knife on the floor it had some blood on it then Ken he walked passed the chicken and chips shop and he heard some talking behind the shop he hides behind the wall he saw some boxes and he secured the boxes and then the same car appeared then the car started up then it chased him through the town finally he lost him then at night he went to the car shop to get a car because he got tired of running then at night he was driving around when suddenly he heard a gunshot he went to the bank he saw the same man who was at the fire he sneaked in then he grabbed the man in the mask he put him to sleep then he brought him to the police station then they gave him the job to be a police officer he was so happy, he said “I'm going to buy everyone dinner.Then he went home and Ken said to himself” tomorrow is another day.
Monday, 24 August 2015
My 3D shape that I made.
On Monday 24 of August Mrs Raj taught us how to measure and make a net to create a 3 dimensional shape.
I made a cuboid.
My cuboid has six faces, twelve edges and eight vertices. I made this lovely 3D box.
Boxes are made to hold or store things, Boxes are used for packaging I am going to put my pens in side my cuboid.
I like learning about 3D shapes and creating them. I will create more shapes.
I learnt that you had to use the tips of your nails, to make the creases sharp. I had fun doing this activity.
Tuesday, 18 August 2015
character Description
Character Name: ken.
Character Description: he is a boy 37 years old he is tall and strong he is smart because when he go s to soccer people he listens instead of walking away he is friendly because he gives money to poor people he lives in Britain he has blond hair his hair is long he puts a headband around his hair he has dark red eyes and he wears orange cloths.
Monday, 17 August 2015
Claire s secret ambition
On Monday Claire went to the military to join the army but she did not get the job to be a soldier, she did get the doctor job though, that means she can fix the soldiers wounds. She was happy and her mum was happy for her. She is a good doctor but she wanted to look after the dogs. Claire told her boss and he said he might give her the job. After a couple of days she got to look after the dogs. Claire got the job that she really wanted.
Friday, 14 August 2015
reading week 3
Time Out by C. Todd Maguire School Journal P4 N2 2004
Is Caitlyn her real name?
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no
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she says that her name is caitlyn so no one can find the refuge.
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They can’t tell people where the refuge is because it is a dangerous place to go to.
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YES
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so bad people might come like the stepfather
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There are good things about living at the refuge.
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YES
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because there will be no people getting hurt and there will be no police coming to the
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VOCABULARY - describe in your own words what these words mean:
- refuge : A safe house to live in
- crowded : crazy and dumbdumb in ways
- concentrate :
- agreement : being angry at two or more people
Plus
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Minus
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Interesting
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You can leave your kids there after school and weekends
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You have to share the shower and
share your room with everyone
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The refuge is a safe house for people that is hurt and pore
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Monday, 10 August 2015
my friend
my friend is Trent
his body is bent
that is not what i meant he lives in my air vent and he goes camping and puts up his tent .
Friday, 31 July 2015
kiwi kids news
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The House in the Cliff Houses on top of cliffs can be a bit scary but have some pretty stunning views, but would you live in a house inside the side of a cliff?!
A pair of Greek architects have built a terrifyingly beautiful house into the side of a cliff, offering an amazing view from a scary height.
Laertis Antonios Ando Vassiliou and Pantelis Kampouropoulos built the cliff house with a roof-top pool (which is actually at ground level) and underground walls which helps keep the house warm in winter and cool in the summer.
There is no doubt that the home is stunning but would you be brave enough to live in the side of a cliff? Check out the pictures below!
emotion poem
- Pick an emotion
- What colour might that emotion be? What does it taste, smell, look, sound and feel like? Use adjectives (describing words) and metaphors and similes for each line.
Example:
3. Write a poem using the same formula as above. One line for each sense.
pride
pride is yellow like the kowhai tree
it tastes like the breeze in the lake .
it smells like wind, you can feel it, but you cant see it.
it looks like the sun it is HOT
it can sound like a plane flying in the blue sky
it feels awesome inside when im appreciated
pride
reading week 2
The layout of the words make this poem more interesting.
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it does
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yes it makes it more interesting
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- pulsing=throb rhythmically pulsate
- gazing= it is another word for watching
- infinite=is a number that doesn't stop
- depth=is a night sky
- polished= steering= it is something that is spinning
- We look up at the sky, but the poem says: ‘gazing down into the infinite depths of the night sky’ what do you think it means by that?
- Where is the author when they wrote this poem?
- The last stanza says: ‘Life is a space journey - anyone steering?’ What is this a metaphor for?
- This poem uses rhyme at the end of each stanza, what other language f
- Using the same language features (rhyme, layout, metaphors, and the others you've identified) write your own poem about time, from looking out a window…
BY MCKENZIE CHARILE
Friday, 24 July 2015
reading week one
A comma is like a full stop
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yes
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It is just like a full stop but it is not on the line and it does not make the words stop.
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This poem has correct punctuation.
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yes
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VOCABULARY - describe in your own words what these words mean:
droop - Means that you are tired and sad.
squiggly -It means things that you what to wriggled
chaos -Means that it is not controllable.
palm- On your hand.
sense- means that you understand
I'm a pet pen click click on a book writing the waves I'm playing some video games pop i got you with a camera bANG and when I write i blow people away.
Thursday, 23 July 2015
holidays poem
Holidays
Holidays are green like the soft grass and small leaves .
It tastes , like warm chocolate milk in my house .
Smells like the cold fresh air around my face .
It looks like the sun that is bright like me .
Sounds like popcorn pop pop pop
And it feels like a ice block
Holidays
Friday, 3 July 2015
science week
At glenbrae school week 10 my school had science week
On Monday i was with Mrs Raj she teaches us about the water cycle and the three stages of matter we had to make facts about the water cycle and the three stages of matter for the rest of the day .
Then on Tuesday we were with Mrs Parker and we were learning how to make bread we used yeast sugar and carbon dioxide the first bread we put in the oven and the second bread we put it in the sun for 2 hours then after 2 hours both bread were ready and we had to see what was the difference i liked the small one .
Then on Wednesday we went into room ten we were learning how to make scones and how to avoid apple skin turning brown and first we did apple skin turning brown and we used l and p sprite water and vinegar the only thing that we used was water and vinegar the vinegar worked then we learnt how to make scones my group used l and p then we had to wait for half an hour while we are waiting we were telling riddles then when it was done we went and sat at the tables the l and p one was yuck and the vinegar one was yuck too and the sprite one was yummy .
Then on Thursday we went to two classes first we went to room 9 then we had to do a water cycle activity in partners then we made salt and sugar taste yuck the salt tastes like salt water and the sugar tastes like burnt wood then we went to room 8 and we mixed lemon juice with baking soda then we had to work in house group and the groups are red yellow green and blue the green and yellow house always won then we came back to class and saw what was different between your bread and there bread .
Thursday, 2 July 2015
THE ROAD SHOW !
Today we went into the hall to see all the things that all the classes that have bin learning in term 2 my class room was learning about world war one and two I was doing world war 1 and 2 weapons with Luisa and Honey. It was really fun Luisa was presenting in the morning she was there for in hour and I was there for half hour and Honey was there the rest of the hour. I was looking after a kid from room 4 he was 5 years old. I learned that it is fun to show your work to other class rooms and it is fun to see other class rooms work. The best presentation was the room 10 one because they learnt how to make slime it smells like perfume.
Tuesday, 30 June 2015
week 11 reading
6WALT: identify and use similes and metaphors in writing.
SC: Determine the difference between a simile and a metaphor and write your own.
Drought by Adrienne Frater SJ P3 N2 2010
Answer with full sentences
eg. Who is your teacher in Room 7?
Correct: Mrs Parker is my teacher in Room 7
Wrong: Mrs Parker
This text uses similes and metaphors as part of the figurative language.
A simile is when something is described as being ‘like’ or ‘as’ something which it is not.
eg. I flopped across my desk like a dead fish.
The author is not actually a dead fish, but it helps you to get a picture of the look and feel of a situation.
A metaphor is when something is described in that is actually is something which it is not.
eg. I’m drowning in sweat.
The author is not actually drowning, but it gives you the idea of just how much she is sweating.
- Find as many metaphors and similes in the text as you can and list them below.
Metaphors
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Similes
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I was drowning in sweat
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It felt like I was a dead fish swimming in a sea of fire
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2. Write your own metaphors and similes to describe how you feel/felt during the basketball lessons. (2 of each)
Metaphor
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Simile
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It felt like I was flying with the ball
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I felt like a bird flying with the ball
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I was looking with my two heads everywhere the ball bounced.
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I felt like a two headed monster while trying to bounce the ball and watch where I am going.
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